Flowers Around a Grave

            On page 33, in “Citizen” by Claudia Rankine, she includes art by Nick Cave titled Soundsuits. These costumes were made to completely cover the individual’s body, creating a second skin that hides, gender, race, and class and urge the audience to watch without judgment. Relating to this type of artwork, I visited “Nick Cave: Forothermore” at the Guggenheim Museum. These morals were from a survey exhibition that covered Cave’s entire collection of the artist’s career, featured sculptures, and rarely seen early works.

            The art piece that caught my eye the most was Nick Cave’s piece called “Unarmed”, made in 2016, which addresses contemporary societal ills including racism, gun violence, and climate change. All the flowers are made from tiny beads and wire which is an ongoing theme throughout Nick Cave’s work. “Unarmed” looks like a weak hand reaching up to say something or defend its point. The surrounding flowers and leaves represent emotions, ideas, and actions, but also can resemble climate change. When looking at this piece in person I think the use of flowers is to distract and hide the suffering that this hand or “person” is feeling because of racial discrimination and police brutality. I think specifically Cave wanted to resemble the black fist in the air used in the Black Lives Matter movement while emphasizing the continues to fight for rights with the wrinkles and half-curled finger.

            A way I connected this artwork to the novel “Citizen” was when Rankine says, “Whatever the reason for the rots, images of the looters’, continued rampage eventually displaced the fact that an unarmed man was shot to death” (116). The ongoing problem with racial acts and police brutality is the repetition of unarmed victims having no way to defend themselves. This defenseless hand is surrounded by flowers almost like a newly covered grave bordered by flowers when another person has been taken from us.   

WAP: Women As Projects

By: Luella Luttkus

For this assignment, my short text was song lyrics of “WAP” by Cardi B which features Megan Thee Stallion. This controversial, popular song started a large debate regarding whether or not Cardi B and Megan Thee Stallion should be criticized for objectifying women and their bodies throughout their 3-minute-long song. Throughout these lyrics, both female singers include excruciating sexual descriptions and exhibits women as sexual objects when relating to vicious sexual intercourse. This song made women worldwide very uncomfortable and most agree they feel like the songs interpretation of intercoruse is far from realistic.

When working on my poem I wanted to create a different type of uncomfortable feeling for the reader while using the same exact lyrics from the song. Doing so shows how intense and gruesome these lyrics are. The poem I created is a story of a girl who was sexually assaulted when asking for a ride home from a mysterious man. The start and end of this poem have “There’s this house” repeating but the part that is crossed out is “some whores in”. Erasing this line and the repetition of what is showing emphasizes how the girl will live the rest of her life thinking about the events that took place throughout the poem. The description of the man’s house has been implanted into the girls brain because of the dreadful memories she will have for the rest of her life. The being includes details of the man and hints as to how the girl was put into this position. Then instead of getting into sexual details like the song does, I used the title WAP and the repetition of wet ass pussy throughout the song to be the silence during this unbearable experience. Finally i ended my poem with internal thoughts from the girl after this hideous experience has happened. My last line included the mention of cops to ensure to the reader that the girl got justice but the last word of my poem is “whores” because that is now what the girl will be labeled as even after this life altering encounter.

Fa Mu Lan, Kingston’s Aunt and Mother: Impowering Feminists Proving Cultural Norms Wrong

If you got the chance to write a whole book about our life, how would you start, what would you talk about, what memories would you share, and why share anything at all if there is no greater meaning? These are questions I was asking myself when starting my blog post and wondering what to talk about. Most books people read have a beginning, middle, and end but for “The Woman Warrior” by Maxine Hong Kingston she surprised all of us. She did so by starting with sharing a secret story, then sharing an ancient history tale, and recently with the story of her parents. Even with Kingston’s cultural background and harsh expectations she shares stories of empowered women like her aunt, Fa Mu Lan, and her mother because she is a feminist.

In the opening chapter “No Name Women” it is hard to see this idea come to life but if we take a closer look, I believe Kingston started with this story to expose the Chinese culture and share how this story impacted what is important to her. Although, she never met her aunt she ends this chapter by saying “her ghost (aunt) drawn to me because now, after fifty years of neglect, I alone devote pages of paper to her, though not origamied in houses and clothes.” (Kingston 16). Kingston states her connection to her aunt even without meeting her and how she is important enough to be in her book, but she cannot share her photos or story anywhere else because of her culture. The only way Kingston could share her aunt’s story was in her book and that is why she started with the story of how she first learned about her and felt her original bond.

White tigers in the Chinese culture symbolize power and army; in ancient times they were related to military affairs such as the white tiger flag that commanded the army in war. When reflecting on Fa Mu Lan’s story, white tigers was the perfect chapter name because it describes what makes Fa Mu Lan who she is, power. When reading this story, we think about how Fa Mu Lan fought through starvation, exertion, and combat. But as a women what people overlook is how Fa Mu Lan had to hide gender, pregnancy throughout, and secretly give birth and then continue fighting in battle directly after. “When I (Fa Mu Lan) became pregnant, during the last four months, I wore my armor altered so that I looked like a powerful, big man.” (39). Even after faking to every solider in her army that she was a man she continued battling during her pregnancy which made her look more powerful. Fa Mu Lan also accomplished her own goal of having a family and becoming a mother even if she could not tend to her baby right away. “My son stared, very impressed by the general he had seen in the parade, but his father said, ‘It’s your mother’. (45). Everything that the Chinese culture did not allow Fa Mu Lan did better than any man could and all while taking care of her motherly duties. Her son would be able to exist and be raised by a secrete woman leader.

Finally, we have chapter three “Shaman”, also meaning wizard, indicated a person who can mediate with the powers generating things. I think Kingston named the chapter “Shaman” after her mother because she looks up to her like she has superpowers after everything she went through from her life in China to her work in school, and finally in America when she was able created a life for herself. Kingston’s other was dedicated to her studies and schoolwork that she felt appreciated when sharing answers or helping other students. She was qualified in multiple areas and was known as a fearless women after destroying a ghost. But one part that is overlooked in this chapter is how considerate her mother was. During her time in China when the Japanese were attacking, people can get paranoid and blame innocent people, this  happened to the crazy lady in Kingston’s mother’s home. Kingston’s mother was the only one who tried to defend the crazy lady and wanted to protect her no matter what majority of people said. The lady was blamed for the planes that would fly over and eventually was stoned to death because of it. The next day the planes came again. “My mother, who had turned her back and walked up the mountain (she never treated those about to die), looked down at the mass of flesh and rocks, the sleeves, the blood flecks” (96). Kingston’s mother forced herself to walk away and look down on the people because they were no longer worth her respect because of their actions and six months later she left China.

In conclusion, Kingston might have her own memoir, but she used it to show the power of woman hood and how woman can secede no matter what standards or cultural beliefs are holding them back. Kingston’s aunt, mother and story of Fa Mu Lan show how powerful women really are and even commanding cultural beliefs cannot stop their impressive actions.

My two discussion questions following my blog post are:

  1. Do you believe that feminism is an important message throughout this memoir Why or why not, and if so, how can you support this claim?
  2. What other kinds of messages could Kingston be trying to express through her aunt, mother, or Fa Mu Lan’s stories and how can you prove this?

The Woman Warrior : Memoirs of a Girlhood among Ghosts. New York :Vintage Books, 1989.

Hi, I’m Luella


I am currently a freshman at SUNY Cortland and recently just changed my major from kinesiology to adolescence education in english. Reading and writing has always come easy to me and i enjoy reading more types of literature. I live in Westchester County which is about an hour from the city. I have many outdoor trails where i take my dogs Duke and Molly. I also enjoy playing and watching different sports or hanging out with friends. This semester i am excited to rush for a sorority and going to more campus events.

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