Offensive Poem

The poem that I found is called the “Offensive Poem.” This poem caught my eye because it is true, and the truth is offensive. Many do not want to hear the truth especially when it comes to something you love such as your country. However, the basic truth is our government does take advantage of us citizens. They use us as pawns in a political game and are always power hungry. Unfortunately, we have elected officials who abuse their power. This is a big issue in today’s society.  We are very compliant as a society that many cannot see the big picture becaise they do not want to believe that the government can be so corrupt. The corruption of the government is one of the reasons why our country is so divided.  

As I was going through the poem, I picked out the key points that I thought were the most powerful. Such as the line “The majority may be silent but they’re thinking men- People know when something’s wrong, when there is danger.” This line really spoke out to me because the silent majority sees in between the lines and the bigger picture. We now, especially more than ever, are afraid to speak out because people, strangers will come after us and try to “cancel” us. Ruining our lives and future careers. Another line that stood out to me was “Truth can be offensive but can never be hidden, it has a way of coming out and spilling over.” There are problems we do not know about, but the ones we do, we have the facts, it makes us wonder with what we do know what else we do not know and when it will be revealed. There are problems we do not know about, but the ones we do know are bad. Which makes us wonder what else we do not know and when it will be revealed. That is my view on the poem, and it tells us more than what we are reading.  

Are Ghosts Real or Are they Just Moments from Our past that Haunt Us?  

In “Shaman” we the readers discover new information about Kingston’s mother Orchid. We take a deeper dive into Kingston and Orchids’ mother-daughter relationship. In the beginning of this chapter of the novel Kingston seems to admire her mother for a minute. She sees her mother as a ghost destroyer. In China Orchid was a doctor and was successful. Kingston looks on her mother as someone who escaped their traditional roles and made something of themself.  

In the novel Kingston states, “Once in a long while, four times so far for me, my mother brings out the metal tube that holds her medical diploma. On the tube are gold circles crossed with seven red lines each— “joy” ideographs in abstract” Kingston then continues to discover more about her mother’s degree. Kingston states, “Inside the can are three scrolls, one inside another. The largest says that in the twenty third year of the National Republic, to the Keung School of Midwifery, where she has had two years of instruction and Hospital Practice, awards its Diploma to my mother, who has shown through oral and written examination her Prociency in Midwifery, Pediatrics, Gynecology, “Medicine,” Surgery,” Therapeutics, Ophthalmology, Bacteriology, Dermatology, Nursing, and Bandage.” When finding out all this information about her mother we see Kingston almost become inspired by her mother but then goes onto explain how her mother used to have two children before her. Kingston states, “Their two children had been dead for ten years. If he did not return soon, there would be no more children. (“They were three and two years old, a boy and a girl. They could talk already.”) My father did send money regularly, though, and she had nobody to spend it on but herself. She bought good clothes and shoes. Then she decided to use the money to become a doctor. She did not leave for Canton immediately after the children died. In China there was time to complete feelings. As my father had done, my mother left the village by ship.” In this part of the story, we learned that Kingston was not the first born even though as we read more into the story her mother swears that she is. Kingston had an older brother and sister. We learn where Orchid got the money to become a doctor, but we do not know how her children died. This brings up the conversation of how Orchids ghost stories started. Orchid tells Kingston, “That was a Photo Ghost,” said my mother when the students talked-story. “She needn’t have been afraid. Most ghosts are only nightmares. Somebody should have held her and wiggled her ears to wake her up.” Orchid tells Kingston that ghosts are only nightmares. However, Orchid would stay in that room every night and study in that room. A room full of “ghosts.” She even took the privilege of proving to her roommates that the room is not scary and to make a point slept in the room one night. That night she encountered a “sitting ghost.” Orchid confronts the ghost and states, “I do not give in,” she said. “There is no pain you can inflict that I cannot endure. You’re wrong if you think I’m afraid of you. You’re no mystery to me. I’ve heard of you Sitting Ghosts before. Yes, people have lived to tell about you. You kill babies, you cowards.You have no power over a strong woman. You are no more dangerous than a nesting cat.” Orchid says that the sitting ghosts kills babies. Before her encounter with the sitting ghosts, she tells Kingston that ghosts are just nightmares, nightmares can be a part of our past and losing her two children was a big part of her past and still is ten years later.  

As we go deeper and deeper into this part of the novel, we see that Orchid bought a slave-nurse in China. Orchid buys her slave and tells her, “I am a doctor,” she told her new slave, when they were out of the dealer’s hearing, “and I shall train you to be my nurse.” As we go a little further Kingston asks her mother about how much the slave cost. Kingston asks her mother “How much money did you pay to buy her? ” One hundred and eighty dollars. ” How much money did you pay the doctor and the hospital when I was born?” “Two hundred dollars.” “Oh.” “That’s two hundred dollars American money.” “Was the one hundred- and eighty-dollars American money?” “No.” “How much was it American money?” “Fifty dollars. That’s because she was sixteen years old. Eight-year-olds were about twenty dollars. Five-year-olds were ten dollars and up. Two-year-olds were about five dollars. Babies were free. During the war, though, when you were born, many people gave older girls away for free. And here I was in the United States paying two hundred dollars for you.” After finding out all the new information about her mother, Kingston is taken back, as if buying the slave was a better deal than giving birth to her own daughter. Orchid tells these stories to Kingston, leaving her confused on whether they are true. Does Orchids decisions in her past haunt her? Are Orchids past decisions the ghosts that she constantly talks about? Between the death of her children, the selling of young girls and her medical practice career are these the ghosts that haunt her? At the end of this section Kingston explains how her mother has given her pictures to dream nightmares of babies. Kingston explains how she would have taken a different route when it came to caring for the baby ‘s suffering. Kingston for a moment admired her mother but then realized she is as well being fed the same nightmares that her mother talks about. The same ghosts.  

Discussion questions:  

  1. Do you think Orchid is hypocritical with the way she talks about Chinese women after reading this chapter?  
  1. Do you believe that Orchids past are the ghosts she is talking about?  
  1. Do you think Kingston has a different view of her mother after finding out about her mother’s past? Why do you think she told Kingston this part about her past?  

Gabriella Delorenzo

Hi I’m Gabriella but my friends and family usually call me Gab or Gabby. I am from Staten Island NY. So I am about forty minutes out from the city. I am a Junior and I am majoring in early childhood/childhood education with a concentration in English. I have always wanted to work with kids. At home I work at a private pre-school and I used to be a dance teacher. I have been dancing since I was three and dancing competitively since I was seven. It has always been a big part of my life so I continued my dance career here at Suny Cortland. I am a member of the cortland danceworks team. In my free time besides dancing I like to read a lot. I am a little bit of a book worm but I also really love to work out and catch up on a new show!

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